Doberman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My first flash-animator]

Bad.

As much as it was a first flash, I feel that not enough effort and work was put into this animation.
Still, at least when you progress and learn to become better, you'll be able to make better animations.

[Lucas Chronicles Eps 2]

Nice.

This flash is pretty good, along with the visuals to it, and the interactivity with it as well, I liked it.
Sprites were nice as well, although small, and the story built up in this flash is good as well, I hope more come for these chronicles.

SoraMegamanSonic responds:

Thanks! And there will be more. This is only chapter one of Lucas Chronicles.

[ZombieVille: Be Mine]

Crazy!

The whole movie was pretty crazy, and the crazy-ass voice acting inside it as well, most of the audio is out of sync as well, and a preloader could have been used at the start to make the movie load up.
The ending was pretty funny though, his head got blown off.
Keep up the work.

zombieville responds:

Yeah, sometimes the sound is on.. sometimes it's off. When I was making this I intended it to be a quicktime file. I only uploaded the swf because that is what this site wanted.

[Congratulations, John!]

Bwahahahaha.

I loved the song on this, McCain could`ve won, but obama did instead, but then again, there will always be winners and losers sometimes

Sidorio responds:

I would lol if McCain had been elected and died the day after.

[CS Learns Physics]

Oh sidorio.

I love you for making these ultimate sexy flashes of captain steve, he really rocks, and I hope the episodes keep on coming.

This one was the best so far.

Sidorio responds:

It's probably because I added the element of learning to this one. BTW, in my next one I'm going to make Steve meet Doberman7 because it's the only way I can thank you for my banner. Don't try and protest because I'll make it anyway.

[A Stick War-Preview]

Pretty dull.

Stick movies, one of the most basic things to do in animation, but this isnt very brilliant on what it would be.

A preview it may be, but what I can judge from this preview/animation is that it looks pretty sloppy and lazy (And I can see from your author comments) but when you`re getting onto that stage, you will find yourself not even finishing off the full movie (And doubting that you will ever finish it)

The content on what it was going to be looks fine, hell, this may be a first animation for you, but it looks typically rubbish from my point of view, and possibly to others if they`ll start watching and reviewing this.

My only advice to say is that spend time, maybe watch some other peoples stick animations, you may learn a bit and see how you they are made out, you dont have to be a super animation whizz, but in time, you will get to that point where you`ll be able to work up on animations quite easily and not so sloppy.