Doberman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My first flash-animator]

Bad.

As much as it was a first flash, I feel that not enough effort and work was put into this animation.
Still, at least when you progress and learn to become better, you'll be able to make better animations.

[Charlie Does A Dance]

Yay

Man, I love this shit, now charlie is doing a dance.

Sidorio responds:

I like to think this episode broke new ground.

[Lucas Chronicles Eps 2]

Nice.

This flash is pretty good, along with the visuals to it, and the interactivity with it as well, I liked it.
Sprites were nice as well, although small, and the story built up in this flash is good as well, I hope more come for these chronicles.

SoraMegamanSonic responds:

Thanks! And there will be more. This is only chapter one of Lucas Chronicles.

[ZombieVille: Be Mine]

Crazy!

The whole movie was pretty crazy, and the crazy-ass voice acting inside it as well, most of the audio is out of sync as well, and a preloader could have been used at the start to make the movie load up.
The ending was pretty funny though, his head got blown off.
Keep up the work.

zombieville responds:

Yeah, sometimes the sound is on.. sometimes it's off. When I was making this I intended it to be a quicktime file. I only uploaded the swf because that is what this site wanted.

[Slug Attack (Trailer)]

Cool, I guess.

Looks pretty decent I guess, I`ll probably enjoy the wait for the actual full movie to be finished.
The sprites, graphics and background were pretty awesome, I like the fade effect you`ve done with the text in this trailer.

[Congratulations, John!]

Bwahahahaha.

I loved the song on this, McCain could`ve won, but obama did instead, but then again, there will always be winners and losers sometimes

Sidorio responds:

I would lol if McCain had been elected and died the day after.

[CS Meets Doberman7]

Sweet.

Oh yes sidorio, you fucking rock, Captain steve actually met me, Im so happy for you that you`ve made this, its awesome.

Sidorio responds:

How did it feel to take down the evil corrupt federation?

[CS Learns Physics]

Oh sidorio.

I love you for making these ultimate sexy flashes of captain steve, he really rocks, and I hope the episodes keep on coming.

This one was the best so far.

Sidorio responds:

It's probably because I added the element of learning to this one. BTW, in my next one I'm going to make Steve meet Doberman7 because it's the only way I can thank you for my banner. Don't try and protest because I'll make it anyway.

[A Stick War-Preview]

Pretty dull.

Stick movies, one of the most basic things to do in animation, but this isnt very brilliant on what it would be.

A preview it may be, but what I can judge from this preview/animation is that it looks pretty sloppy and lazy (And I can see from your author comments) but when you`re getting onto that stage, you will find yourself not even finishing off the full movie (And doubting that you will ever finish it)

The content on what it was going to be looks fine, hell, this may be a first animation for you, but it looks typically rubbish from my point of view, and possibly to others if they`ll start watching and reviewing this.

My only advice to say is that spend time, maybe watch some other peoples stick animations, you may learn a bit and see how you they are made out, you dont have to be a super animation whizz, but in time, you will get to that point where you`ll be able to work up on animations quite easily and not so sloppy.

[dying for madness]

Fine but. . .

Its rushed, I really feel that this movie was partially rushed throughout the making of it.
Mostly, I dont believe making a madness tribute is easy as hell, but if you did spend a bit more time on it possibly, you`d make this tribute better than it would be right now.
I have to say the music was annoying as fuck, no offence, but my ears were being literally raped by it.
Sound effects would`ve probably been nicer, seeing as that there was no sound whatsoever (Apart from the music)

Overall, I feel this could do with an improvement towards it, but still, keep trying and you`ll eventually get to the stage where you`ll manage to make your movies seem much better towards and audience.

AutoTank responds:

thanks doberman, yes it was rushed I guess, I'm not used to the length it takes to make an animation. I am making another animation now, which I am taking more time on, has voice acting and Sound FX, hopefully it will be a lot better.

What was wrong with the music, is it that you just don't like rock?

You need to remember that this is my first ever animation, litterly, this is the first I've ever made.